Burn I see you falling down again I won’t pick you up again Because I see you with your mentor Trying to make it a living hell And you’re driving me crazy I'm screaming my guts out You’re hearing my every word When I say this clearly Where will you be? When the end of the world comes So stop playing these mind games with me You’re hurting me more The heartache won’t go away The sickness your life’s for So go burn somewhere else Because I'm tired of your crying You’re not crying on my shoulder anymore You lost my trust You lost my love I want to forget you Erase you from my mind I'm sick and tired Of your stupid games Your helpless lies And your stupid differences You’re hearing my every word And I hope you hear this clearly So go burn somewhere else
Wow... there's some SERIOUS emotion there. That's really good. I've read your other stuff too, it's all really great. Have you ever considered maybe publishing your stuff?
That's awesome. Indeed, maybe you should consider about publishing your work. From what I've read now of your work, it's all good.
wow!that was indeed a very emotional poem ...as the previous two people said and i will agree that your literary work is really good and you may start publishing your work keep on writing.You have the support of the lpa members!