<div align=center>Broken Wings Lyrics written and copyright of Derek Jonathan Oswald [Verse 1] I feel the dark blue skies begin to linger, I trace the constellations with my finger, Darkness casting down beneath the trees, I feel your presence overpowering me, I could say it all to you a thousand times, I bleed my heart deep within these paper lines; I know what your conscience might say inside, I wish you could tell me what your heart confides [Chorus] Follow me and take my hand I promise you with all I am Feeling ways I've never felt Cannot keep this to myself I'll share it with you while I sing You helped me fly on broken wings [Verse 2] Before you my heart was cold and frozen, But you helped to melt the ice in everyway, I never knew that I could feel so happy, But then you helped to change that philosophy And now I feel that I’m not only stronger, But able to tell the words I need to say, I felt a love for you for even longer, That my heart inside could ever comprehend, I’ll stay by your side until your very end, I’ll try everything despite the circumstance, If you could only give me a chance [Chorus] Follow me and take my hand I promise you with all I am Feeling ways I've never felt Cannot keep this to myself I'll share it with you while I sing You helped me fly on broken wings [Bridge] I gaze upon the deep white snow, With feelings you may never know, Just please give me a chance to, Explain how I feel about you, I know you might not understand, Why I can feel the way I can, But I only need you to see, I need you to be here with me… [Chorus] Follow me and take my hand I promise you with all I am Feeling ways I've never felt Cannot keep this to myself I'll share it with you while I sing You helped me fly on broken wings I'll share it with you while I sing [Screamed] You helped me fly on broken wings!</div> -- Naturally I must thank Will for tying the loose ends of my original chorus, and giving me tips on how to get a better flow. The song would've sucked if it wasnt for him.
Thanks everyone. I changed a line in the first verse (deep inside to deep within) and I changed the 2nd line of the second verse. It's perfect now.
You rule!!!! S*it if I could write like that! Man 10/10, wait no 100/10!!!! Man compare mine 'No One' to your's! Man!!!! And I still need help to fix loose end's on mine, so if anyone can help?
I'm blown away! AWESOMENESS! 15/10 hehehe...I love the part about tracing the constellations with your finger...that produces some interesting imagery.