Answer Me

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    Friskey™

    Friskey™ LPA Super Member LPA Addict

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    Answer Me

    Fall through me
    Don’t you see the past in me?
    Because the future is like nothing yet
    I’m still waiting for the answer
    To everything said and done
    So the sun feels like it’s already set

    The answer to me
    Is one question added on?
    I wonder how deep this rabbit hole goes
    Because I’m already gone
    She said she loved me
    Where did the time go?
    Because the answer I see
    Is being alone

    It’s raining only on my head
    It feels like the future is done only for me
    Should we be dead?
    If we can only see
    There’s a twitch in my system
    I know there’s one in your system too
    You can pull the knife out of my back
    But I want to forget you
     
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    a life in ashes

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    it's great, especially this bit:

    keep up the good work.
     
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    Andrea

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    I love this piece of writing! Fantastic. B)
     
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    lp_sk8ergurl

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    Good work.
     
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    fallenangel

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    thought this was pretty cool! would love to see more soon.
     
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    D_A_V_I_D

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    pretty good,
    This rhyme felt a bit forced to me, even if it wasn't but that is the only thing i didn't like about it, overall great job, can't wait to see more.
     
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    mash_master

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    thats a snoop dogg song!!!!!!!!!
     
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    The Doctor

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    Shut up about Snoop Dogg. No one cares.
     

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