Very good movie, I work at a theator and get movies for free, but I never see any because either I am too busy or too lazy. This though, this I...
again, thanks to you all for the replies
very very good, surprised no one has responed yet :wth: one of the better ones i have read here!
Potential this has. [I sound like Yoda] It was crafted well, in fact very well, I like how you rhymed 3 lines then broke it up with the fourth...
you've got something special here man, i like this alot.
Christian Bale said he loves listening to Linkin Park, he is; for those who dont know, the new Batman in "Batman: Begins" and is also co-staring...
The Undying Oath Despair in a ray of sunshine A day dons on the promise made long ago Dreams always floated in the wind, but now nightmares...
he can rhyme nice , but he's just too much busy focusing on his *gangsta image* that's kinda wrong , Als eminem would match with rock music a lot...
hmm, actually i was going to put it in a first person, but changed it to more narritive, 3rd would be cool, thank you.
i like the setup, reminds me in some parts like my own, "The Black Rose" as far as subject is conserned. Is good, some words i would consider...
where did you get that picture in your sig? anyway back on topic, looks like a cool site, does warner have any control or is it just LP alone,...
thank you guys for your responces, more are welcome
I liked it, twas good indeed! the way you wrote it looks funky too
"The Life of a Shadow" Sleepless men stride upon hapless dreams. Crushed by cries of torment, and hushed at the face of Shame. Down the cold...
I love the one where the dog says, "Its not as crazy as when you narrated your own life" then it flashes back to Peter sitting at the table and...
It is good, very dark and yet creepy how Lee died before it was over in a freak accedent. The first scene when you see the crow come back to his...
Yeah not necessarily bigger words, but more descriptive words, but I can image the song being sung by slipknot or the first verse by RATM
i think you mean, "Only one now" Nice poem, some rhymes seemed forced but it hardly took away from the saddness of it! Really something, more...
very nice, good job, a little bit of a flow problem in the beginning, but over all very good
Thank you all, and to all a good day
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