Human Eyes

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    Nick

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    Life is wonderful, we are just blind.
    Or maybe just ignorance.
    Call it human eyes.
    Stop.
    Smile.
    Destructive speeds and road signs.

    Just listen, stop..listen
    Each sound will change
    With every waking moment, A breath exchanged.

    I could discover what all of this means
    If you'd give me the chance
    Like learning to dance, Please come with me.
    And I'll kiss you so soft, so gentle
    The Sea, it faulters at parts.
    Undisclosed, but only to you
    My love...

    Next week, rain
    Call it the same...broadcast the night
    This is all going to be bigger than us.
    Maybe mistrust
    Stop.
    Smile....

    This is worth it.
    You are worth it.
     
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    It has that 'stream of consciousness' narrative that I enjoy so much. Although a few lines do have me wondering, like 'Destructive speeds and road signs.' It really doesn't fit into the context of everything, just feels like it was thrown out there because it helped rhyme. :lol:

    I enjoyed it though.
     
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    Nick

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    Actually it does mean something.

    That whole passage is about how we need to stop every once and a while and just enjoy life, If we speed through it we could miss chances or damage what is good.

    Like if your going to fast in a car and crash and die.

    Plus the road signs are like your chances and yeah.

    I write oddly.
     
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    oh well in that case, i get it. :lol:
     

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