Arlene

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    The Emptiness Machine

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    Arlene

    Arlene, darling
    tell me why are your eyes so blue?
    did you drink the entire sea
    and make it drown in you?

    A cape. A rope. A string.
    The brunette hair that I grasp onto
    You pull me up when I am down
    There's just so much I like about you

    I love the curves
    of your personality
    how it glows with specialty

    You outshine the stars!
    A lamp forever glowing
    Oh I'll bet right now
    that somewhere it's a'snowing

    Arlene, darling
    tell me how you've made my heart sing
    cause I never thought in a thousand years
    that love would find poor old me
    or grant me wings




     
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    Arlene

    Arlene Oh what tangled webs we weave LPA Super Member

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    *looks around* Arlene, as in me?
     
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    minuteforce

    minuteforce Danny's not here, Mrs. Torrance. LPA Team

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    LOL. :lol:
     
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    Friskey™

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    I thought the same damn thing. Because if so, dude...that's creepy. :lol:
     
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    Chris.

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    :lol: I thought the same thing.
     
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    El Muerto

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    I don't know who it's about but it's damn great
     
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    The Emptiness Machine

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    It's not about anyone. I just always loved the name and decided to write about a fictional person of that name. Also I had a rhyme stuck in my head and writing this was the way to get it out. :lol:
     
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    minuteforce

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    A likely story. :sleep:

    Haha. :D
     
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    minusxerø

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    I love that rhyme by the way.

    I didn't catch it until I read it out loud. It has a nice cadence to it.

    I also enjoyed the interesting rhyme scheme you had going on. It's very... unpredictable? You don't stick to one format but it still flows very well.
     

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