Fighting Within Myself

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    Nick

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    Happy birthday to me, I wrote something I liked on my bday. Woo!.

    Distance Can Change Anyone
    Let Them Run, Run Away Into The Dark
    Savor A Year And Mark The Calender
    Feelings Collide, One At A Time.
    Understanding Is Brought By A Traveling Man
    Face Half Covered, Name Lost In The Sand.
    The Masks We Wear Which Cover Our Soul
    Say What You Mean, Give It Space To Breathe And Then Learn Self Control.

    I'm Fighting Within Myself

    Over The Ages, Surprises All Around.
    Shimmering Waters And Trees Made Of Gold
    The Masks We Wear Which Cover Our Soul.
    Half-Hearted, Not Quite, In Your Full Spirit
    Taking Time, Despite, You Can't Quite Hear It.
    The Sound, The Sound, Oh The Sound He Has Made
    Live In This Day With The Sounds Swept Away.

    (I'm Fighting Within Myself)
     
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    Will

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    I love your lyrics; I should take the time to comment them more often when I read them.

    They always remind me of old Saosin and Circa Survive, although I can't imagine why that would be. :p
     
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    Nick

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    Yeah Anthony's writing style is a HUUUGE influence to me. I've always been drawn to write like that.
     
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    Dean

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    You're definitely one of the best writers here Nick.
     
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    Linja

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    I like it. The fact that all the words start with a capital letter is kind of off-putting, but hell, that's just me. I really like it.
     
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    Nick

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    Sorry, I used to have a problem with typing EVERY word like that, now I just prefer Lyrics or writing to look like that, it gives it a feeling of meaning to me.
     
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    Linja

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    No, no, I get it. I mean, you have a reason for writing like that, and don't just do it because it "looks cool." I appreciate that.
     

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