Ummm don’t take this poem to seriously ladies and gentlemen. Don’t come after me with torches either. All women are crazy. All men are pigs How can you do this? I'm sorry but I just don't understand Sometimes you act so much like a child But still you have the courage to call yourself a man What's wrong with you? You call upon emotions like kids go through shoes Then you blame it on your hormones As if they were a reasonably justifiable excuse Honey I've got to tell you. I'm just done dealing with you And your stacking lies Today I'm setting the line Baby I've got something to say It's not nice but that's okay Your emotions are out of hand I'm putting my foot down, watch me stand He watches her She watches him So hard to interpret one another Can't stop arguing about one thing or the other Why do all men act like pigs? As if they were raised in barns Why do all women go crazy? Exploding without any sign of alarm Maybe someday men will get things right Maybe someday women will cease to over analyze But for now life goes on just as it always has And will continue on for the good or bad
THAT. MADE. SO. MUCH. SENSE. << >> *hides torch* ^^ You have potential though. Kinda reminds me of the way some LP and FM songs are written though. oO;
I like it, not a topic i've seen covered often and I like that. I really like the line "You call upon emotions like kids go th(r)ough shoes" (dispite the spelling mistake lol) i really love that line and it manages to express things so well and also gives a laugh. Sorry shrazer but that was hardly LP FM like, this is a poem of 6 stanzas.
Thank you for all your kind comments. I thought that most people would feel negative towards this poem because it can seem a little rude. But I thank you all, so very deeply. Shrazer235, it's nothing like a FM or LP song. Please tell me how you came to that conclusion as I would know. Interesting. Link-in-the-park, I thought it was 7 stanza's maybe I'm wrong lol. I don't really pay attention to rules of poetry, I just write. But I counted 7 and 4 lines each.. Thanks for letting me know of my mistake in Through, as it has now been fixed. Mr. Nobody thank you for reading my poem, I really appreciate all our you guys-gals comments.