Hindsight Is Twenty-Twenty (So They Say)

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    Will

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    Certain people on these boards, should they have been here long enough, will know that this is about the same girl whom inspired me to begin writing to begin with. I'll always love her... always. ... ... ...

    "Hindsight Is Twenty-Twenty (So They Say)"

    There are so many things which I've come to regret
    And yet none are so important as that next step
    The step which I could have taken to make you mine
    All I knew, all I know, and all that I could find
    Your emerald-green eyes could have brought me here, babe
    And yet today it's the one thing that I fear, babe
    I love you and I miss you and I can't take it
    And maybe one day I'll be able to fake it
    But only God knows why I feel the way I do
    Constantly watching you and the things that you do
    Wishing that you were by my side for all of time
    Wishing, just wishing that I could have made you mine
    You're the most beautiful girl that I've ever seen
    And now that I know that it was never a dream
    I wish I could have made you my girl, my girl, mine
    'Cause I would have made you my world, my world, and find
    That there was no greater pleasure than your love, girl
    And now I am sitting here, praying above, girl
    That one day we'll be together forever, girl
    Maybe then, maybe then we'll be together girl
    Until then I'll just wipe away all my tears, girl
    And pray to God that these aren't all wasted years, girl
     
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    well, frankly the "girl" in the end seems to lower the quality of the lyrics and make it sound like BSB song...no offence. but i like it. it spells sincerity in all it's words.
     
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    I had to add that extra syllable so all the lines had the same number of them. :lol: I was also slightly (actually very) intoxicated. :lol: I'm probably actually going to rewrite this one later. Thanks for the comment though! :)
     
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    Your poem is like a paragraph. haha. its cool.
     
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    Thanks. :)
     
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    chekc out my dedication
     

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