Sorry above my bad english what is in my song and LPA forum just i am learning... Just I wanna become singer if i will be grow up and these are my first lyrcs, what i wrote... I wrote above my feelings...Just tell me what do you think about the lyrcs Sometimes I wanna die because everyone dislikes me. No one doesnt care. Why I live in this world, nobody doesn't need me.. ouu And I feel i'm alone in world I feel I'm like in the hell. I'm sick about it Just wanna die All is over I take the knife and put it on my vein I want die, just die Why everyone are teasing? Why they dont live their life I'm sick about it This is my life, I do what I want, not your business. Anyway nobody doesnt care And I feel i'm alone in world I feel I'm like in the hell. I'm sick about it Just wanna die All is over I take the knife and put it on my vein I want die, just die Sometimes I'm going to praying, but the god doesnt help me I'm sick about it, my life sucks just wanna die nobody doesnt care It's my life, why you're teasing Why you're just teasing Just wanna die, just die Why god doesnt help me.
I hope it isn't a joke. If it's an honest attempt at making some lyrics I think it's completely bad ass. People always try to make fun of 'emo' lyrics and fail miserably at being funny, but this guy genuinely tried, and he accidentally made the best 'emo' parody ever.
Yeah, if he will be grow up? That's not good. There's a chance he might not ever live past his hard teenage years. Maybe he already take the knife and put it on his vein?
I'll be honest, terrible lyrics, but we've all gotta start off somewhere. Hell I look back on my lyrics from when I first started out and everything was very emoish, bland and just a pile of crap in general so criticism of this piece is valid but that's not to say there's no potential there. That is to say if this guy doesn't carry out some of the shit he's saying in this piece...