It's nothing much I guess. I just felt like writing down random feelings.. I hope it goes well as a poem, so far I like it. ------------------- -Forgive Me- I've opened up my mind to find my soul and define my reason I hope you can forgive me- for all i've done has only shattered in ruin.. everything I touch turns solid- almost as solid as my heart beating outragously within me.. but deep down my sorrow overcomes these thoughts drowning my feelings and what's left of me down farther I wish I could take it back everything i've said.. everything i've done.. but now I know what causes you this anger is me so for that I have no right to live..
Very good, Anya. I think you have a spelling mistake. It should be shattered. Just thought I would point that out.
Oh my god you're right. I can't believe it! I'm a neat freak when it come's to these things. Well thankyou, Andrea.