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    If I had ever imagined,
    It would have come to this.
    I would freeze every memory,
    I would have saved each kiss.

    If had known before,
    That this might be the day.
    One inwhich the time seems like,
    It's left and gone away.

    If I had pretended,
    That this was all just a dream.
    It wouldn't have felt like we were,
    Breaking at the seam.

    If you hadn't been so stubborn,
    And me so scarred and weak.
    I wouldn't have to regret,
    All the things I had to speak.

    If I had a feeling,
    That this could start the end.
    I could never look at you,
    The same way once again.

    And now it hurts,
    Not to have you by my side.
    You're here/ Not next to me,
    Why do I always hide?

    I wrote this song last night, but it's actually about a situation I had to face in June this past year. As usual, please comment. Thanks



    "People are afraid of themselves, of their own reality; their feelings most of all. People talk about how great love is, but that's bullshit. Love hurts. Feelings are disturbing. People are taught that pain is evil and dangerous. How can they deal with love if they're afraid to feel? Pain is meant to wake us up. People try to hide their pain. But they're wrong. Pain is something to carry, like a radio. You feel your strength in the experience of pain. It's all in how you carry it. That's what matters. Pain is a feeling. Your feelings are a part of you. Your own reality. If you feel ashamed of them, and hide them, you're letting society destroy your reality. You should stand up for your right to feel your pain."

    Jim Morrison 1943-1971


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    *tear*



    That's awesome! I remember when that happened, and it's the exact way I felt
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    Great job. You have gone poem happy now. *gasp*

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    Lorn: *holds her breath* Poem happy? That's gree-e-at!

    Neil: I'm glad my poem did us both some justice

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    you seem to be getting better at expressing yourself. nice poem.

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    Originally posted by Hybrid Soldier@Dec 6 2003, 01:31 PM
    you seem to be getting better at expressing yourself. nice poem.
    Aaw, thanks for the compliment bud. Somedays I have to express myself in writing or drawing because the biggest mistake I could make would be to keep it bottled. :wth:

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    Thats really good

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    Thanks Broken Fist

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