Writing: Cracks

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    lime treacle

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    As the book pages fade
    the addict doesn't come clean
    As her hand slips away
    nothing remains to be seen.

    Our cells don't divide
    Our bones do not mend
    What's left is a bland,
    bleak truth we all bend.

    As fake as it looks
    through a mist of all colours
    is a smiling, satisfied face
    worried about dollars
    because she can't afford
    a continuous fix,
    An illusion of safety
    with her blood she would mix.

    Tomorrow she'll leave,
    step into the day
    Temptation will lead her
    Down the stairway
    and the cracks she shall step on
    They'll tear her away,
    They'll breathe her in
    and swallow her stay
    Forever she'll be trapped
    without knowing so,
    Time will bleed as her
    state segues, for
    she'll forever be dying
    Oblivious to pain, and
    her brain shall be rotting,
    no life left to maintain.
     
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    Erica

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    Its great!
     
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    lime treacle

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    If you say so. :lol:
     
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    You're right I take it back... :lol:

    Really though, its really good!
     
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    Glad you think so. :)
     
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    I don't think so, I know so (Aw, cheesy).
     
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    :lol:
     

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