Writing: I of the Universe

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    Erica

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    Sometimes I just try and put out a certain atmosphere or setting which is what this is. Just me putting the journeys through my own head down on paper. I wrote it kind of at the risk of it coming out generic (and clearly structureless). I think it came out well though.

    Lying here on this astral beach
    The colors of space filled the sky
    Though the sun has yet to set
    Moons of Blue, green and red peak their heads
    Pearing over far off hills
    White sand soft as cotton sinking beneath me
    The ocean becomes almost ethereal
    Washing up on the rocky shore
    Wind and water echo in perfect harmony
    The song of a siren comes up over the horizon
    So gentle you would think it's only in your head
    In that moment I locked eyes with the universe
    And I saw that we were one in the same
     

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