Writing: The Confidant

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    Gibs

    Gibs The Prog Nerd Über Member

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    Quick Note: This is the first time I've attempted at anything like this, so it kinda sucks, but I felt like sharing. I drew inspiration for a line because of an Opeth song, and just went from there.

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    I keep losing my mind,
    In you, I cannot confide.
    Every moment, I think back to that day,
    When you took my life away.

    Loyalty, honesty, trust, desire,
    All spark has vanished from this fire.

    Though it hurts, though it stings,
    You took more than any of these things.

    Deadly poison, destructive toxin,
    All sense of reality has fled from what I once believed pure.

    It will require all the strength I possess
    To rid this disease that I must oppress.
    You destroyed my life;
    FUCK YOU.
     
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    Erica

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    Lol its not bad. Keep writing, you'll get better.
     
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    Captain-EO

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    Remember when I said I wouldn't bump this Gibs? :kappa:

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