"Survivor"

[Fury99]

This is a rough draft of "Survivor" from the Legacy Of Origin collection.

[Very soft piano]

Hurricanes and tornadoes
destroy the land, that’s how it goes
People pray for survival
before their supposed ends come

I am a survivor
I have what it takes
to make it out alive
because I… survived

Wishing upon the stars
hoping for a better tomorrow
thinking about the outcome without
having the sense of disappointment

I am a survivor
I have what it takes
to make it out alive
because I… survived

[piano build up to guitar strings]

I am a survivor
I have what it takes
to make it out alive
because I….

Survived [over guitar riffs and piano]

I survived

Along the way






I didn't think it was that good so I want some honest feedback, advice, and suggestions. Anything is welcome.

[Shmoanator]

I think it's interesting. The lyrics in the refrain kind of fall a little flat, though. Whenever I write, I always try to make sure the words still make sense when I say them, as if I were using them when speaking normally. I'm a survivor. I have what it takes to make it out alive, because I survived. The first three lines are pretty good, but the last because I survived doesn't quite fit.
These are just my thoughts, of course. You can do whatever you want with this. I was just giving my honest opinion.