I put alot of work into this. Used lots of layers and different melodies. I stripped it down because I wanted it to sound simple and not too complicated. I removed several drum tracks and melodies. I spent like 2 hours on a melody that I ended up removing from the final song http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=44OdO-v9wao Enjoy
Nice job. That was really good. The video was cool, too. I would say it could use vocals or a lead synth as the focal point, though. The song sounds like it's begging for a lead melody.
I have a version with a lead melody I just prefer it without the melody. Seriously. The version you listen to is the best version of both versions I've made.