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Verse 1:
Falling down
As angels try to rescue me
Gently I try to turn
I get caught up and I feel the burn
Nothing left to learn
Nothing left to lose

Chorus:
Take me back home
To a place I know
Now it's time to show you what I've got now
Shining bright, nothing in sight
We're out of time
Take me home

Verse 2:
See the horizon
As they prepare to bury me
Gently I try to turn
Get lost and feel the burn
Nothing left to learn
Nothing left to lose
Nothing left to give
Nothing left to show you

Chorus:
Take me back home
To a place I know
Now it's time to show you what I've got now
Shining bright, nothing in sight
We're out of time
Take me home
Take me home
Take me home
Take me home

Bridge:
Show me what you've got now
Descend and show me what you've got now
Lets end this now and travel home to a place that we all know
Let this be a lesson now I've got no more to show

Chorus:
Take me back home
To a place I know
Now it's time to show what I've got now
Shining bright, nothing in sight
We're out of time
Take me home