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    Note: I sampled the bridge from TRUSTcompany's song "Today." I do not claim responsibility for that excerpt of lyrics. ("Without a sound you say / I am yours / I found myself today / In your words")

    CANVAS.

    I canít find myself inside
    No matter how hard I try
    And Iím left here to deny
    That Iím broken down by fear
    Even though I know youíre here
    And I know that you are near

    Yet I canít push myself through
    And Iím slowly losing you
    And I donít know what to do

    Iím scared
    Of what I have to do
    Iím scared
    Of never seeing this through
    Iím scared
    Of blowing the opportunity
    Iím scared
    Of losing you for me

    Am I waiting here too long
    Have I fallen all along
    Can you help me become strong
    ĎCause I need somewhere to hide
    And I want you in my life
    So in you I can confide

    Yet I canít push myself through
    And Iím slowly losing you
    And I donít know what to do

    Iím scared
    Of what I have to do
    Iím scared
    Of never seeing this through
    Iím scared
    Of blowing the opportunity
    Iím scared
    Of losing you for me

    Without a sound you say
    I am yours
    I found myself today
    In your words

    Iím scared
    Of what I have to do
    Iím scared
    Of never seeing this through
    Iím scared
    Of blowing the opportunity
    Iím scared
    Of losing you for me

    Iím scared
    Of what I have to do
    Of never seeing this through
    Iím scared
    Of blowing the opportunity
    Of losing you for me
    Iím scared
    Of losing you for me
    Iím scared
    Of losing you for me
    Iím scared
    Of losing you for me
    Iím scared

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    It's well put together. Will, you write a lot. And a lot of good stuff. Keep it up!

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    man, i wish i can write as good as you. all of my writing suck.
    i'm nothing that you can't forget
    (i swear, this is all for the best)

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    Thanks guys.

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    Me likes. Hooray for good writing skills! Me likes!

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    Originally posted by Neo@Jun 3 2003, 09:02 PM
    Me likes. Hooray for good writing skills! Me likes!


    Thanks Neo.

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    Bump.

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    ill say your getting more original and creative as you go along, who knows where you could be in 5 years

    btw: how many songs have u written?

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    Originally posted by Omar@Jun 4 2003, 10:54 PM
    ill say your getting more original and creative as you go along, who knows where you could be in 5 years

    btw: how many songs have u written?
    In 5 years, heh, thanks.

    I don't know how many I've written.

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    Originally posted by Xx_rock_on_xX@Jun 4 2003, 12:25 AM
    man, i wish i can write as good as you. all of my writing suck.
    not really.. you're 11 or 13 already, right? and you'rea already writing.. i think you're making a good start.. cheer up dude!!!

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