My dramtic lil poem

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    Lauren88

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    I wrote this a couple of months ago...I know its not all that great so please no negative replys ^_^
    If Only
    As i sit on my bed,
    cheeks streaming with tears,
    hair all in a mess,
    thinking bout theese past years,
    I try to grasp hold
    of someone to love
    someone to care for,
    ive taken enough,
    I hold in my hand
    such a small little bottle
    that could alter my life
    with a few dredful swallows,
    in a darkening haze
    id be lost forever,
    would i be missed?
    or would i never?
    Will i ever have someone to hold close to my heart,
    someone to love me and who has from the start,
    or will i be left all alone and so lonely,
    day after day,
    with no one to hold me.
    If only ,if only,when the sun would rise,
    id smile and find you right by my side,
    If only,if only,the mornings were brighter,
    the nights less cold,my burdens much lighter,
    If only,if only,I could make you my own,capture your
    heart,show you love never shown,
    If only,if only,you were my only,
    and were for only the rest of time.
     
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    Crazy.Desperate.Insane

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    it's good... keep on writing
     
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    Andrea

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    Very good. I like it!
     
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    Lauren88

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    Thanks. :blush:
     

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