Don't Leave Me (One Thing I Know Remix)

Here's the first version of Don't Leave Me (One Thing I Know Remix).
It's not that long yet, but It'll be alot longer soon.
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(Chorus)
Your hearing me out (hearing me out)
Screaming it out (screaming it out)
So hear me out, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'm demanding you right now, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'll scream it or shout/
(DON'T LEAVE ME!) I'm calling you out...

I'm evading you with hi-tech stealth/
Still lost in my mind, wishing for wealth/
I'm making you so ill now you better get
some medicine, anything to cure your health/

(Pre-Chorus)
[The pain inside is too strong]
The pain inside is too strong/
Left with the consequence, barely
able to carry-on/
[Theres only one thing I know...]
[Only one thing I know...]
You | are | WRONG!/

It seems like I'm in a place I can't get out of/
It seems like I'm lost without love/
[Theres only one thing I know...]
That I'll rise above/

(Chorus)
Your hearing me out (hearing me out)
Screaming it out (screaming it out)
So hear me out, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'm demanding you right now, (DON'T LEAVE ME!)/
I'll scream it or shout/
(DON'T LEAVE ME!) I'm calling you out...

 

Cool. It's great

 

thats good

 

This is one of the good songs that no one replied to

 

This is one of the songs that no one replied to [/b][/quote]
eh?
youve lost me there man

 

eh?
youve lost me there man [/b][/quote]
It's a good song and no one replied to it

 

Thanks, I noticed lol, I made the song a little longer, if you wanna see go to my site, but it only the pre-chorus and chorus.
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I won't be back until Junish because of problems I've been having at home, so this might be my last post for a while.

 

Ok dude, I'll check it out