"Inside" work in progress

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by x7r3m3, May 13, 2003.

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    x7r3m3

    x7r3m3 Guest




    I'm working on this song on and off making it is good as I can, give me some feed back plz so I can change things and make it great...or somewhere in that area...

    Inside

    burned with flames the color of blood
    so dark and bitter it attacks me inside
    I run and hide, trying to find myself
    the man I use to be, its so bad,
    sad they cry for me, they pray for me
    thinking I am the only one who is dark and tormented

    I keep it in, but it still seeks through (2x)

    EDIT: I finished it...

    Inside

    Dark and bitter it attacks me inside/
    Insane and tormented I run and hide/
    I wish I could find something knew/
    But there’s nothing left, except the shame I feel/
    Burned with flames the color of blood!

    I lay, holding my head, going insane/
    I wish I was something more then I am/
    But all they tell me is I’m nothing like I was before/
    They have no idea how this effects me/
    Deep inside…my heart grows darker

    Now I guess it’s got to me/
    I’m always wrong, its killing me/
    I’m not begging, but I want something more/
    My heart has finally tore into little pieces/
    Falling into this black hole!

    I lay, holding my head, going insane/
    I wish I was something more then I am/
    But all they tell me is I’m nothing like I was before/
    They have no idea how this effects me/
    Deep inside…my heart grows darker

    I remember (remember) I remember/
    So long ago it seems, but nothing has changed/
    I’m still the same/
    I take (take) I take/
    I fake how I feel everyday/
    I’m still the same/

    I lay, holding my head, going insane/
    I wish I was something more then I am/
    But all they tell me is I’m nothing like I was before/
    They have no idea how this effects me/
    Deep inside…my heart grows darker

    Deep inside, Deep inside, Deep inside. Inside…
     
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    x7r3m3

    x7r3m3 Guest




    ^bump^ now that im done tell me what YOU think...
     

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