My World When I close my eyes everything is as I want it to be and when I hide I can't hear the voices laughing at me So when I run I can turn away from all the lies and when I hide I can't feel the pain I lock inside So when I'm gone they won't even know I'm not around till they stop and realize that I'm not on the ground under their feet now I know that I'll be left alone, I'll run away to a place that I can call my own. Chorus: I'll run away to a new world, a place inside my mind I'll save myself from all the pain, I'll leave the hate behind Runaway to a secret place, a world inside my head Somewhere I can find myself, fall asleep before I'm dead When I close my eyes All I see is what I want to see and when I hide All I do is look inside of me So when I run I can move away from all my fear and live alone Knowing I'm safe with all I hold dear and when I'm gone They won't even know I'm not around till they realize that I'm not on the ground under their feet I know I'll be forever left alone living in the solitude of this place I own inside of me I know that is where they'll never see, the only thing they don't know is that's where I'll be so I'll run Chorus: I'll run away to a new world, a place inside my mind I'll save myself from all the pain, I'll leave the hate behind Runaway to a secret place, a world inside my head Somewhere I can find myself, fall asleep before I'm dead I'll sleep the pain away live in yesterday a world I've created somewhere far away there's always something wrong I know I don't belong but somehow in this hidden place, I know that I am strong... It's a lil strange, but if you think about it you'll undertsand! Let me know if you like it! Open for comments of ALL KINDS!
It can be a bit confusing at times, but overall I get the meaning, you have nice flow and some cool rhymes! Nice work, 4/5