Here's the scenario: You're falling for a girl (in my case it was my best friend) and school is almost over and you still haven't confessed how you feel. Now Summer will come and you won't see her as often, if not at all. All you're gonna do all Summer is think about her. Read this poem I wrote and give me some feedback, LPA family. The Crickets Beautiful & young loving season of Spring, You’re at last leaving, but nothing did you bring? Of course not, you brought me this crush, this odd thing. No matter how I shake it off, it still clings. The arriving of Summer may just even bring stronger feelings, As I gradually become love-sick with no absolute healing. What everyone else wants, is just what I don’t; The farewell of school just brings me down so low. I’ll be shattered each lonely Summer night while the crickets chirp, But that sound and the memories will help me rest like the birds. Crickets bring me memories of Summers’ featured inside my past; Not able to see my friends almost each day will be a tough task. Out of them all, I’ll miss you the most, Because I’m more fond of you; more close. My Summer nights will be spent gazing outside my open window, As the stars shine bright with the moonlight, & I cool as the wind blows. Not even a month of school remains, And soon I’ll be suffering from pain. I guess if there’s a beginning, there has to be an end, But over the Summer days, let’s still stay the close of friends. Crickets chirp and in a distance, I can hear your voice; It’s beautiful symphony and a wonderful noise. Those eyes, how they just sparkle with delight, not even like the stars, Because your set of sapphires just take my breath and steal my heart. The cloudless sunny skies & my tear-covered face, Means Summer’s arriving & Spring without a trace. Keeping my faith, I’m hoping we stay like this over the coming season, Because to forget a face as precious as yours, dear, I see no reason. The crickets will every night endure me into a sleep of heavenly dreams; Where you would be lying in my arms in a bed of roses, ‘till we fall asleep; & I’d pluck one from the grass, twirling it between your soft & smooth hair; I reach to preciously kiss your forehead as your eyes dazzle & glare. For every Summer sunset, I’ll anticipate & see my hands tremble and shake. The crickets begin right after sunset causing the sky to change to many shades. The first pair of stars I see, are just like the pair of gorgeous lips that you have, Which are so lightly colored with an attractiveness that I can’t seem to pass. You are & will always be my one & only, I only dream of you love, to ever hold me. To show my love for you & how much I care, I know not how, But I’ll regret it over the Summer when I’ll be so down. I’m starving for your divine affection; your wonderful love I need to be fed, And any day now, the crickets will start to put me into sweet dreams; into bed.
for more responses, i wud keep these all in one topic, but i like it, i dont want school to end either...several reasons...
Neo at least you'll see her next school year. In my case she knows cuz I was brave enough to tell her, but it wasn't easy at all...... And I won't see her anymore cuz it's my last year and I graduate and she'll go somewhere to study in Univ. and I'll go somewhere to study in Univ. [dif. country] and.......... :'( [That's what my siggy is about.... this last month in school....]
Yeah, this already happened to me a few years ago. I feel your pain though, man. Resort to music for aid.
Ye man but not actually not quite exact. Cuz music can be really depressing at the same time.... you need friends at times like this
Music helps the depression squeeze out of you like a sponge. Letting it all out is better than holding it in, at least in my view. I don't really have too many friends so music is my alternative.
But if you talk about the prob. with a friend you'll feel much better [yes i agree music is the alternative]
Yes, but there have been times were I fell for that friend that helped me out (if it's a girl that is). Then it just sparked a repetitive cycle of broken hearts and that's why I resort to music %99.9 of the time.
Okey cool back to my topic with Neo :whistle: this is a topic for broken hearts :wth: [Damn it sounds stupid. I actually never imagined that i'll say it....]
I haven't had a broken heart in a long time but trust me, I can easily remember the pain. One of the worst things in the world is falling for someone at the end of the school year and never being able to tell them before school's out. Then you miss them like hell all summer long.
That happened to me when I left year 6 (2 years ago) It's sad [/b][/quote] I'm sorry man. Now I'm also in this position.....