3 of my song's re-done

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    x7r3m3

    x7r3m3 Guest




    Here are songs I have posted befor and re-done, tell me what you think, I think there better then before, but most likely can be eaven better

    NEVER WALKED AWAY

    [Verse]
    Looking at me now, they say I have no soul
    With my lifeless eyes, I stand up tall
    Not going to fall, I stand ready to fight…
    (And all I’m going to do is give all I got)

    [Bridge]
    If you think I’m going to walk, (you’re wrong)
    If you think I’m going to run, (your wrong)
    If you think I’m going to hide, (your wrong)

    [Chorus]
    Another night follows the day
    I wander, farther, deep in my soul
    It’s all I have left…
    (I’ll never change)
    That’s why, the last thing I will ever do is cry
    Sometimes I just hate to do it, but I just don’t walk away…

    [Verse]
    I know for a fact, that’s what you want me to do
    Just to lay down/act like nothing has happened
    (Why don’t you understand) it’s painted on the wall
    I will never fall…

    [Bridge]
    If you think I’m going to look away, (you’re wrong)
    If you think I’m going to give up, (your wrong)
    If you think I’m going to cry, (your wrong)

    [Chorus]
    Another night follows the day
    I wander, farther, deep in my soul
    It’s all I have left…
    (I’ll never change)
    That’s why, the last thing I will ever do is cry
    I hate to do it, but I just don’t walk away…

    [Verse]
    It’s the same, just as before, never walked away (3x)

    [Chorus]
    Another night follows the day
    I wander, farther, deep in my soul
    It’s all I have left…
    (I’ll never change)
    That’s why, the last thing I will ever do is cry
    I hate to do it, but I just don’t walk away…

    CONSUMING

    [Verse]
    Deep in the shadows (you see my face)
    Is this the case, to be forsaken
    it hurts so much, deep down with in
    I hate to say it, I just can't take it

    [Chorus]
    I’m screaming, feeling the pain
    I’m falling, shedding a tear
    I’m holding my head…
    consuming me, taking it all…

    [Verse]
    Is this how it is suppose to be
    I remember forgetting it all
    when it started attacking me
    the time just stood still

    [Chorus]
    I’m screaming, feeling the pain
    I’m falling, shedding a tear
    I’m holding my head…
    consuming me, taking it all…

    [Verse]
    I take it all with in
    I fall feeling the pain
    I lack what I did before
    I hate how I am today
    I have nothing left…

    I take it all with in
    I fall feeling the pain
    I lack what I did before
    I hate how I am today
    I have nothing left!

    [Chorus]
    I’m screaming, feeling the pain
    I’m falling, shedding a tear
    I’m holding my head…
    consuming me, taking it all…

    It’s Consuming me, from with in (x2)

    It’s consuming me…

    Taste the Ground

    [Chorus]
    Realizing what I have to do now
    Breaking away from this pain
    The shame I felt no longer exists
    I no longer feel like I’m slain
    The memories are floating away

    [Verse]
    My heart beat, slowly dies down
    It’s no longer reflecting on me
    There no longer aiming there guns at me
    I can get off the ground
    No longer wondering why…

    [Chorus]
    Realizing what I have to do now
    Breaking away from this pain
    The shame I felt no longer exists
    I no longer feel like I’m slain
    The memories are floating away

    [Verse]
    I’m finding my self once again
    The sad thoughts I had once with in…
    there only a memory now
    as I’m now longer burned by your lies
    No longer wondering why…

    [Chorus]
    Realizing what I have to do now
    Breaking away from this pain
    The shame I felt no longer exists
    I no longer feel like I’m slain
    The memories are floating away

    [Verse]
    Why should you care/looking through the shattered glass
    you stop/in your memory you find/how it all went wrong
    I see right through you…

    [Chorus]
    Realizing what I have to do now
    Breaking away from this pain
    The shame I felt no longer exists
    I no longer feel like I’m slain
    The memories are floating away
     
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    x7r3m3

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    around 30 views...and no replys lol, c'mon give me some feedback ^^
     

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