Behind a door

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    chazy_chaz_fan

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    This was also known as "a sirens song"


    Behind a door....(sirens song)


    A lonely voice
    I hear it calling
    I keep looking back
    I cant hear the words...
    and no-one can explain...
    words uttered in the rain...

    I hear an echo
    In a storm of words
    a hurting voice behind a door.
    Can YOU hear it calling
    through the sound of the rain?
    a hurting voice behind a door.

    I keep looking back
    I still hear it calling
    I'm lost in the minutes
    of time slowed by sorrow
    because no-one can explain
    words uttered in the rain...

    I can't stand the echo
    In a storm of words
    A crying voice behind a door.
    Can YOU hear it's pain
    sailing through the night?
    a crying voice behind a door.

    I stare ahead
    my memories cry
    is it real...
    this voice i hear?
    no-one can explain,
    these words uttered in the rain.

    I can hear the echo
    In a storm of words
    A lonely voice behind a door.
    can you hear me calling
    through the sound of the waves?
    I am the voice behind the door.

    I keep looking out...
    Do YOU understand?
    Things arent as they seem,
    as reflections dance,the truth...
    and no-one can explian,
    my words uttered in the rain.

    I am the siren
    in a dark storm of words
    The painful voice behind a door.
    can you hear me crying
    through the sounds of the rain?
    I'm calling to you,from behind a door.

    In a storm of words
    a lonely voice among the waves
    I cry to you,you die for me
    I lie in eternal loneliness
    In a land far away,
    I sing in the rain...

    I am the echo,the shadow
    in a land far from here
    no-one could explain
    my words in the rain,
    till they realized,I am the voice,
    the crying voice,behind a door.
    I'm calling you, you'll hear my song,
    my lonely voice,behind a door....
     
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    Hybrid Soldier

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    bravo bravo!
    excellent poem. :)
    so much emotion put into it.
     
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    Dedicated

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    ^_^ GREAT! ^_^
     
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    Chrissy

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    very nice poem! any reason for the double title?
     
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    Omar

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    no offense to the other writers here, but that is BY FAR THE BEST THING I'VE READ HERE EVER.

    and u shud consider that a pretty big compliment lol
     
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    Amy

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    :eek: That is very very good
     
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    Andrea

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    WOW! :eek:
    Excellent work! ^_^
     
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    Happy Gilmore

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    :) Man I like it very much. U have a talent ;) Write something else...
     

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