Basically all I've done is add a new instrumental and horrible vocals. Download the Demo here: http://www.megaupload.com/?d=VHG4ZGRY Lyrics: (in case you can't make them out)
The intro should have faded into the actual song and the guitar sounded like it was recorded straight from the amp and nothing else. Also, the vocals were too loud and the whole thing just seemed messy. Good idea, but this convinces me that Fallout doesn't need an overlaying remix.
Thanks for the input, I really appreciate it. And yes, very messy I agree. And I don't look down on that. Heh, maybe I'll redo the vocals, but I only have a $1 mic and a very old pc to record with. haha. Oh, and I didn't use any guitar.