Update: I updated the remix. It should be better now. Listen to it again. My remix of Blackout: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6fXJ9UjkatA Download from my website: http://ptto911.webs.com/
I really like the instrumental in the beginning. I don't think it goes well with the vocals, though. The rest of the song is average.
Version two is fantastic. Good thinking by adding in the demo lyrics to the song! The only thing I dont like is the rattling sound during Mike's vocal solo.
Thank you. The rattling sound corresponds with the lyrics. When he says, "Floating down...", the rattling sound gets lower, and when he says, "...floating up", the sound gets higher again (in reverse). It's fine if you don't like it, though. I'm just telling you the point of it.