ALL INSIDE [Verse] Deep in my soul it takes it's toul I don't know how to stop it but at the end of it all if im where I am now I won't escape the pain... [Chours] Trying hard to let go im not sure if I can I'm feeling a emteyness inside I'm beginning to loose it all I was sacerd to see, its all inside [Verse] I never told my self the truth Everywhere I look all I see is the same thing I'm not sure if i'm who I use to be I turned my back, I didnt see it's not how it use to be... [Chours] Trying hard to let go im not sure if I can I'm feeling a emteyness inside I'm beginning to loose it all I was sacerd to see, its all inside [Verse] I try to regain all I had befor.. it seemed like it was deep inside... You all thought I was safe while... Holding my head... [Chours] Trying hard to let go im not sure if I can I'm feeling a emteyness inside I'm beginning to loose it all I was sacerd to see, its all inside
there are a few too many spelling errors in this. toul = tool, empteyness=emptiness, sacerd=scared, etc. Also loose is not the same thing as lose...loose is something not tight, lose is the opposite of win...that's something a spell checker will probably NOT catch. Next time try downloading a word processor that does spell check, it's easier on us to read; we don't have to try and interpret what you mean. plus it'll make the song look that much better. i give you 8/10 for the idea, 3/10 for your spelling/grammar.
okay good! i used to STINK at spelling (namely grammar, but spelling as well) and i must say, i can't type so if i didn't have this spell checker word processor...my stuff would be much worse!