All Inside

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    x7r3m3

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    ALL INSIDE

    [Verse]
    Deep in my soul
    it takes it's toul
    I don't know how to stop it
    but at the end of it all
    if im where I am now
    I won't escape the pain...

    [Chours]
    Trying hard to let go
    im not sure if I can
    I'm feeling a emteyness inside
    I'm beginning to loose it all
    I was sacerd to see, its all inside

    [Verse]
    I never told my self the truth
    Everywhere I look all I see is the same thing
    I'm not sure
    if i'm who I use to be
    I turned my back, I didnt see
    it's not how it use to be...

    [Chours]
    Trying hard to let go
    im not sure if I can
    I'm feeling a emteyness inside
    I'm beginning to loose it all
    I was sacerd to see, its all inside

    [Verse]
    I try to regain all I had befor..
    it seemed like it was deep inside...
    You all thought I was safe while...
    Holding my head...

    [Chours]
    Trying hard to let go
    im not sure if I can
    I'm feeling a emteyness inside
    I'm beginning to loose it all
    I was sacerd to see, its all inside
     
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    meteorxero

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    Its ok :rob: :joe:
     
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    [Darken Hybrid]

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    It's pretty good...
     
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    x7r3m3

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    lol thank you,...least im getten reply's :D
     
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    Cal

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    can u spell emptyness?
     
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    Chrissy

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    there are a few too many spelling errors in this. toul = tool, empteyness=emptiness, sacerd=scared, etc. Also loose is not the same thing as lose...loose is something not tight, lose is the opposite of win...that's something a spell checker will probably NOT catch. Next time try downloading a word processor that does spell check, it's easier on us to read; we don't have to try and interpret what you mean. plus it'll make the song look that much better. i give you 8/10 for the idea, 3/10 for your spelling/grammar.
     
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    x7r3m3

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    lol, thx, I was never a good speller... im dl a word processor now :)
     
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    Chrissy

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    okay ^_^ good! i used to STINK at spelling (namely grammar, but spelling as well) and i must say, i can't type so if i didn't have this spell checker word processor...my stuff would be much worse!
     

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