Hurt

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    Chrissy

    Chrissy Super Member

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    Hurt

    A piece of you
    A piece of me
    Lying here together
    In negativity.

    Sometimes I wish times would change
    So I wouldn’t have to feel like I’m stretched across a range.
    I feel so numb
    You make me feel so dumb.
    Why are you here except to criticize me?
    Make me feel second to someone who isn’t free?
    Get yourself a new game
    Because this is one girl who isn’t lame.

    A piece of you
    A piece of me
    Lying here together
    In negativity.

    The pain won’t go away
    It just refuses to up and leave, always trying to stay.
    My scars won’t heal
    And I feel
    Like a piece of dirt
    In the middle of the desert.

    A piece of you
    A piece of me
    Lying here together
    In negativity.

    Where are you going?
    I’m not done with you yet!
    You’ve made me hurt,
    Now feel the consequences of your regret.

    A piece of you
    A piece of me
    Lying here together
    In negativity.

    A piece of you
    A piece of me
    Lying here together
    In negativity.
     
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    wow, it's a very good song.
     
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    Chrissy

    Chrissy Super Member

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    aww thanks :) i've been writing for ages, but that's the first song i've managed to come up with!
     
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    LPro

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    awsome B) i really like it.you should write more
     
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    Chrissy

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    awww thanks! im trying to come up with a linkin park fanfic...but i doubt ill post it here! i just feel too intimidated with the subject matter and all...plus what if i don't write one of the guys in correctly >< i don't need that stress. but i can guarantee you'll see more poetry/songs from me.
     
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    Andrea

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    I like it!
     
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    osctotheedge

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    great job!
     

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