Just Go (My Bloody Pool) by TheLucky1

[Xpeerahmental]

My first big try at writing lyrics, don't hate please. I personally don't like it anymore but for the first few weeks of it being done I was quite proud so I thought I'd share.

Just Go

(Verse 1)
No, i don't wanna hear your reasonings no more
I just don't know what I am waiting for
But I guess I respect the choice you made
Just leave me here in this blood I bathe
On the floor..
On the floor
On the... floor

(I don't know what to think anymore)

(Chorus)
(Just go)

I won't fight you
But I just want you to know
(Just go)

I can't fight you
And just so you know
I never had a choice
(Just go)

Verse 2
And, as I look at all the doubt I've made
And even after all this times decayed
You tell me that it's alright but there's
No escape, this feeling just wont go a - way
Go away
Go away
Go away

(I don't remember what I was fighting for!)

(Chorus)
(Just go)

I won't fight you
But I just want you to know
(Just go)

I can't fight you
And just so you know
I never had a choice
(Just go)

~(Solo)~ (may be, beginning to stray off the point)

(Bridge)
Pretending to be what I'm not
Holding on to what I've...
Got

Everything's faded black and white
But I'm trying my best not to...
Fight

All around me is turning cold
And the only thing keeping me warm is this...
Bloody pool

-(Calms Down)-

I don't know what to think any more
(Bloody pool...)
I don't remember what I was fighting for!
(This bloody pool)
It's all on the floor
(Your bloody pool)
It's all on the floor
(Just go)

Our pool...

(Chorus)
(Just go)

I won't fight you
But I just want you to know
(Just go)

I can't fight you
And just so you know
I never had-a-choice !!!
Just go!

Just go!
Just go!
Just go!

Just shut up! and leave me alone...

(I don't want to hear your voice anymore)
(I don't know what I was waiting for)
(This is why I respect the choice you made...)
(To leave me here bleeding...)

Just... Go

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Another untitled little diddy I made, I still really like this one though (Read it as if you were frantic and restless, but also kinda quickly along with the pattern.)
vvvvvvvvvvvvv

Wait!, please, I super glued my heart to the bottom of your shoe
You have no idea what each step puts me through
So take a running start, make your move, take a leap
But I can't promise I'll be alright if you land on your feet

Watch my heart explode (<---I'm not sure about that line though)

Please wait, This isn't right, I know I'm not dead
It's just my throat is freaking packed full of lead
Don't look now, I'm sick and spitting up bullets
This might help a little, here's my head now pull it.

Here's a chance of a life time, just do it


Hope you liked it, thoughts??

[Xpeerahmental]

Hmm, I don't mind thoughts, dudes. Bash it, like it, whatever. May be suggest some changes, I wouldn't mind any kind of input.

[Rohit LP]

in 'just go' you did let ur feelings out...or did you write by your magination...coz the song reflects like it happend in ur life..
nice 1 tough...songs a bit harsh tough..

[Xpeerahmental]

in 'just go' you did let ur feelings out...or did you write by your magination...coz the song reflects like it happend in ur life..
nice 1 tough...songs a bit harsh tough..

Yeah, it is though, both are actually. They're about this girl, but the one I didn't mean to come off so harshly and at first it had no chorus, just some verses and a breakdown I had a softer sorrowful song in mind but it did a 360. But yeah it reflects how I felt about a very important person in my life right now at the time... or it was supposed to but it veered off in a different direction.

[Xpeerahmental]

I should write another here. Something aimless.

[Rohit LP]

Yeah, it is though, both are actually. They're about this girl, but the one I didn't mean to come off so harshly and at first it had no chorus, just some verses and a breakdown I had a softer sorrowful song in mind but it did a 360. But yeah it reflects how I felt about a very important person in my life right now at the time... or it was supposed to but it veered off in a different direction.

happens..with me too..i can understad to some extent hw it feels..