Work In Progress

Discussion in 'Your Projects' started by Dedicated, Apr 22, 2003.

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    Dedicated

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    WORK IN PROGRESS

    I'm having a big difficulty,
    I can't seem to smile,
    Nothing makes me happy,
    I'm sorry this might take a while.
    What is the point?
    Why can't I see?
    Why does nothing seem to,
    Seem to matter to me?

    I'm not a work in progress,
    I'm completely done,
    Why can't I get together?
    Why can't I have some fun?

    Will anybody help me?
    'Cause no one seems to care,
    And no one seems to give one,
    But I'm having a nightmare,
    Pictures worth a thousand words,
    But yours is worth more,
    So Why can't I stand up?
    And get up off the floor?

    I'm not a work in progress,
    I'm completely done,
    Why can't I get together?
    Why can't I have some fun?

    I'm still not happy,
    I'm still very sad,
    Why can't I get better?
    And remember what we had?
    Now you've packed your bags up,
    You're going away,
    Promise me you'll come back,
    Come back someday.

    'Cause I'm not a work in progress,
    I'm completely done,
    I''m gonna get together,
    And go and have some fun.
    'Cause I'm not a work in progress,
    I'm completely done,
    I'm gonna get off this floor,
    And go and have some fun.


    so...... tell me what you think. ^_^
     
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    Aaron

    Aaron Foundation LPA Super Member

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    this is my first reply, it sounds cool, but it actually sounds more like a poem, it is used for rap i no, but i think it sounds like a poem, its just my opinion
     

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