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    Cavern of Darkness

    Hearing the screaming of thousands of dying souls
    Prepare for a journey through a dark world untold
    Swirling, poisonous clouds spread across the sky
    Threatening the oppressive sun with eternal night
    While on a more dimly lit, foggy terrain below you
    The landscape melts and dissolves, remains true
    Milky, indefinable mutations creep across the land
    Satan himself is there to take you by the hand
    Through this cavern of darkness we shall travel
    Evil that should never be told will soon unravel
    Throwing itself upon the mercy of the darkness
    White defeated by black and all who oppose this
    Demonic screams can be heard from all around
    Churning and burning from deep underground
    Feeling the betrayal and hate laid upon them all
    Dark ambience surrounds it to make them fall
    The darkness awaiting you on the other side
    Is enough to make all that is good run and hide
    The evil breathed here will bring all to an end
    And to the shadows of pain all will be sent
    Feeding and breeding on all that is good
    Stealthy assailants rip through neighborhoods
    To the darkness all those who oppose evil go
    Down the river Styx is where they shall flow
    To the fiery pits of Satanic, demonic laughter
    Hypnotic shrill screams turn them against her
    Burning with the rest of those who oppose him
    The Dark Lord is here, hes whos been chosen
    The journey through the dark cavern comes to end
    All that was good is gone there are no friends
    White defeated by black and all that oppose this
    Good throws itself upon the mercy of darkness

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    Bloody hell Will. Where do you get the inspiration for this stuff?! I swear...you scare me sometimes with the stuff you come out with.

    Top class work mate. Top class.

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    this goes really good with the beat of frgt10. anyways it was great.

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    I like it, has a gothic feel to it. Kind of a new ground for Tha William.

    Keep writin brotha, me likes yo' shiznat.
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    cool

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    Originally posted by Derek@Apr 20 2003, 09:57 AM
    I like it, has a gothic feel to it. Kind of a new ground for Tha William.

    Keep writin brotha, me likes yo&#39; shiznat.
    Gothic? Not for me.

    Will, that was moving. The River Styx was a nice touch, man. I easily placed myself walking into and to the end of this cavern.

    Edit:
    I love how you use so much detail from describing the sky, to approaching the cavern, and then inside the cavern. Your adjectives are super-cool&#33;

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    Originally posted by Derek@Apr 20 2003, 12:57 PM
    I like it, has a gothic feel to it. Kind of a new ground for Tha William.

    Keep writin brotha, me likes yo&#39; shiznat.
    "..me likes yo shiznat"...

    That was funny..

    :whistle:

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    What's a 'Grey Daze'?
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    This is hot&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;&#33;

    p.s people plz read "questions to ask n&#39;tensefied" in writers cove plz

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    Keep up the great talent Will.

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    That was amazing&#33;&#33; It was scary but amazing..Like everyone around here seems to say, yes, you are extremely talented

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