Diction

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    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

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    (Slow Tempo)

    Can I break away from this?
    This constant feeling of helplessness...
    The pain inside, I cannot hide
    And I am so depressed, of

    (Faster)
    CHORUS
    Constant accusations
    And no sense of compassion
    I see no reaction
    When I tell you my frustrations...
    I can only take so much

    (Fast)
    (Why do I try to put my faith in you
    All I see then is the mistakes you do
    All I wanna do is to start erasing you
    From my life, when you take what I make
    You break it, and then I lose all my faith in you
    Now the agony is draggin me downwards
    Becoming so weak I'm branded a coward
    All you want to do is increase your power
    You pressure me back and make me cower
    You ask me to let me trust your promises
    But you've broken them within an hour
    With no real premises for error.

    Sometimes to me your a nightmare, a figure of terror
    Other times to me you are still irresistible
    Sometimes I think I'm being insensitive)

    But whenever I try to trust you to
    Listen to me and my feelings you,
    Break your promise like you always do,
    No matter what I say, I always lose...

    CHORUS

    (Oh yeah and the nagging accusations
    With your sarcasm, increasing my frustrations
    Reliant on degredation to get your way
    Supplied with bribes just to get my say
    Blackmails and agruments are in your array
    Weapons of words are destructive by day
    And at night, it doesn't stop there,
    I get constantly confronted every moment we share
    So c'mon try to get more aware,
    And maybe if they dangerous diction wasn't there
    Life for me would be a lot more fair)
     
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    Methybrea

    Methybrea Well-Known Member

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    Any criticism or praise? :)
     
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    ISnortMyPixieDust

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    boy do I know how that feels...
    Love it. Cool and greatly written. I can feel the beat.
     
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    chazy_chaz_fan

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    Thats kinda deep....I like it! Really good!...thanx 4 reviewing mine!
     

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