.:Motion:. Watching this window [as the cars go by] This world keeps on pace [as it passes me by] Thoughts of you resurface [while I cry] Darkness holds me, eternally [All of your lies] I'll never be, what I thought I once could be Brake me down Conseal my deepest feelings Make me feel like I am useless [this paranoia] I don't know why I am this way All I know is I'm not looking forward to today These thoughts of you and me They're driving me crazy I'm haunted by the things I've done It's been so long Since I've seen the bright side of you Why are things, just this way I'm continually reminded of all those things you say Brake me down Conseal my deepest feelings Make me feel like I am useless [this paranoia] I don't know why I am this way All I kno is I'm not looking forward to today I'm running from THIS I'm running from ME RUN RUN RUN I'm running from ME Brake me down Conseal my deepest feelings Make me feel like I am usesless [this paranoia] I don't know why I am this way All I know, Is that I'm not looking forward, forward to today
i liked some parts and some not thats why [/b][/quote] Alrighty, I've faced rejection before, no big deal but could you tell me what I should improve on so I can change the things I do wrong.