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    Me and one of my friends made some rhymes. We just took the first two rows of "Step Up" just to get the inertia:


    I've heard that some of you are getting help with your rhymes
    You'r not an MC if someone else write your lines
    And now you all idiots think you're something cool
    Sitting in class and trying to rap in school
    Cuz if you want to record some real rap
    You should go to a studio instead of staying here in the trap
    You'll find me at the keyboards fixing some beats
    And once we're finished, we'll have a million hits
    I'm on the mic striking the crowd
    And rap is something that today is allowed
    I'll hit you with some freaking-ass rhyme
    It's so good you'd think I'd be commiting a crime


    [To Be Continued...]

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    hmm...

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    Originally posted by OggeM@Apr 10 2003, 06:11 PM
    hmm...
    Wohoo u like it ?

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    Originally posted by happy_gilmore+Apr 10 2003, 07:12 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (happy_gilmore @ Apr 10 2003, 07:12 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--OggeM@Apr 10 2003, 06:11 PM
    hmm...
    Wohoo u like it ? [/b][/quote]
    some lines

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    Ye I also think some of the lines are good

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    Originally posted by happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 07:21 PM
    Ye I also think some of the lines are good
    it&#39;s feel atrange to talk english to a someone from sweden

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    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.
    So... I'll keep searching for a place called home:
    I'll rip my roots from this earth into the unknown.
    Is it for the dreams I chased or the ones I caught?
    This mystery, this misery is killing me.
    So, now, I'll leave behind a murder scene.
    My life isn't real; it's just a silhouette—
    and, when the sun goes down, I won't exist.

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    Originally posted by Will@Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.
    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e"

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    Originally posted by happy_gilmore+Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (happy_gilmore @ Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--Will@Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.
    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e" [/b][/quote]
    I don&#39;t pronounce it like that and I don&#39;t know anyone that does.

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    Originally posted by OggeM+Apr 10 2003, 06:57 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (OggeM @ Apr 10 2003, 06:57 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'> <!--QuoteBegin--happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 07:21 PM
    Ye I also think some of the lines are good
    it&#39;s feel atrange to talk english to a someone from sweden [/b][/quote]
    But the thing is that i speak a bit swedish cuz i&#39;m not swedish so you are actually forced to speak english

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    Originally posted by happy_gilmore+Apr 10 2003, 09:38 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (happy_gilmore @ Apr 10 2003, 09:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -OggeM@Apr 10 2003, 06:57 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--happy_gilmore
    @Apr 10 2003, 07:21 PM
    Ye I also think some of the lines are good

    it&#39;s feel atrange to talk english to a someone from sweden
    But the thing is that i speak a bit swedish cuz i&#39;m not swedish so you are actually forced to speak english [/b][/quote]
    ok

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    tis alright
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    Originally posted by Will+Apr 10 2003, 08:38 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Will @ Apr 10 2003, 08:38 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--Will
    @Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.

    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e"
    I don&#39;t pronounce it like that and I don&#39;t know anyone that does. [/b][/quote]
    I see that it&#39;s hard for you to use your imagination...

    [too bad]

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    Originally posted by happy_gilmore+Apr 11 2003, 10:59 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (happy_gilmore @ Apr 11 2003, 10:59 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -Will@Apr 10 2003, 08:38 PM
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--Will
    @Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.

    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e"

    I don&#39;t pronounce it like that and I don&#39;t know anyone that does.
    I see that it&#39;s hard for you to use your imagination...

    [too bad] [/b][/quote]
    Nah, I just pronounce words the way they&#39;re supposed to be and I don&#39;t make up my own pronounciations.

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    Originally posted by Will+Apr 11 2003, 06:54 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Will @ Apr 11 2003, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 11 2003, 10:59 AM
    Originally posted by -Will@Apr 10 2003, 08:38 PM
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--Will
    @Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.

    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e"

    I don&#39;t pronounce it like that and I don&#39;t know anyone that does.

    I see that it&#39;s hard for you to use your imagination...

    [too bad]
    Nah, I just pronounce words the way they&#39;re supposed to be and I don&#39;t make up my own pronounciations. [/b][/quote]
    yea poor you

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    Originally posted by happy_gilmore+Apr 12 2003, 05:55 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (happy_gilmore @ Apr 12 2003, 05:55 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -Will@Apr 11 2003, 06:54 PM
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 11 2003, 10:59 AM
    Originally posted by -Will@Apr 10 2003, 08:38 PM
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--Will
    @Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.

    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e"

    I don&#39;t pronounce it like that and I don&#39;t know anyone that does.

    I see that it&#39;s hard for you to use your imagination...

    [too bad]

    Nah, I just pronounce words the way they&#39;re supposed to be and I don&#39;t make up my own pronounciations.
    yea poor you [/b][/quote]
    You may think you&#39;re hurting my feelings but you&#39;re making yourself look dumb.

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    Originally posted by Will+Apr 11 2003, 06:54 PM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Will @ Apr 11 2003, 06:54 PM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 11 2003, 10:59 AM
    Originally posted by -Will@Apr 10 2003, 08:38 PM
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--Will
    @Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.

    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e"

    I don&#39;t pronounce it like that and I don&#39;t know anyone that does.

    I see that it&#39;s hard for you to use your imagination...

    [too bad]
    Nah, I just pronounce words the way they&#39;re supposed to be and I don&#39;t make up my own pronounciations. [/b][/quote]
    But you use improper language like "I heart Connie" right? Awesome.

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    Originally posted by Will+Apr 13 2003, 02:40 AM--></span><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (Will @ Apr 13 2003, 02:40 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'>
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 12 2003, 05:55 AM
    Originally posted by -Will@Apr 11 2003, 06:54 PM
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 11 2003, 10:59 AM
    Originally posted by -Will@Apr 10 2003, 08:38 PM
    Originally posted by -happy_gilmore@Apr 10 2003, 03:36 PM
    <!--QuoteBegin--Will
    @Apr 10 2003, 07:11 PM
    "Beats" and "hits" don&#39;t rhyme, lmao.

    ye they do if you pronouse "hits&#39; - [heets] a bit longer "e"

    I don&#39;t pronounce it like that and I don&#39;t know anyone that does.

    I see that it&#39;s hard for you to use your imagination...

    [too bad]

    Nah, I just pronounce words the way they&#39;re supposed to be and I don&#39;t make up my own pronounciations.

    yea poor you
    You may think you&#39;re hurting my feelings but you&#39;re making yourself look dumb. [/b][/quote]
    HEY dude i&#39;m not trying to hurt anybody&#39;s feelings in this forums [if that&#39;s your purpose] you&#39;re just so critical to everybody in this forums and i don&#39;t think that&#39;s cool...

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    Will and Happy Gilmore, you two are a riot flaming each other&#33; I saw you two go back and forth on the Reanimation Review thread too&#33;

    Thanks for the entertainment&#33;


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    Originally posted by Odaton@Apr 13 2003, 05:04 PM
    Will and Happy Gilmore, you two are a riot flaming each other&#33; I saw you two go back and forth on the Reanimation Review thread too&#33;

    Thanks for the entertainment&#33;
    You&#39;re wlecome My pleasure. My point is to give people happiness [That&#39;s why i&#39;m "Happy Gilmore"]

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