Crash The System

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    Cal

    Cal LPA Super Member LPA Super Member

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    Hey guys im new here, but im starting a band and ive wrote a few songs so im gonna share em with ya - heres one i like the most :D

    [Verse 1]
    shootin up women within the vicinity
    fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity
    take a slash with a coco-cola bottle
    slammin the breaks while your goin full throttle

    [Chorus]
    all you walk around like you think you are the betters
    now all my songs sound like suicide letters
    burn me down - crash the system
    when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

    my mind is crushed its taking some beatings
    i dont know why but i seem to take them
    but i think im gonna leave it - take a long draw
    im going to move on - leave my mind to thaw

    [Chourus]
    all you walk around like you think you are the betters
    now all my songs sound like suicide letters
    burn me down - crash the system
    when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

    [Bridge]
    Crash the system - burn me down
    One step closer - round and round
    my mind is high - above the clouds
    im gonna leave your hearts all laying in shrouds

    [Chorus]
    all you walk around like you think you are the betters
    now all my songs sound like suicide letters
    burn me down - crash the system
    when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em

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    as you can see im not great..... but im only starting :p
     
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    arT saveS

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    Sorry I took a song from a while back but...

    Ok well it's not terrible but you have obivous plagerism....

    "Fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity" Is definately taken from crazy town..

    Also..

    "Now all my songs sound like suicide letters" Is definately also taken from them...

    And the line above what I last typed and that line don't make sense.
     

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