Hey guys im new here, but im starting a band and ive wrote a few songs so im gonna share em with ya - heres one i like the most [Verse 1] shootin up women within the vicinity fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity take a slash with a coco-cola bottle slammin the breaks while your goin full throttle [Chorus] all you walk around like you think you are the betters now all my songs sound like suicide letters burn me down - crash the system when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em my mind is crushed its taking some beatings i dont know why but i seem to take them but i think im gonna leave it - take a long draw im going to move on - leave my mind to thaw [Chourus] all you walk around like you think you are the betters now all my songs sound like suicide letters burn me down - crash the system when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em [Bridge] Crash the system - burn me down One step closer - round and round my mind is high - above the clouds im gonna leave your hearts all laying in shrouds [Chorus] all you walk around like you think you are the betters now all my songs sound like suicide letters burn me down - crash the system when the pack comes you know that i will fist-em ------------------------------------------------------------------------ as you can see im not great..... but im only starting
Sorry I took a song from a while back but... Ok well it's not terrible but you have obivous plagerism.... "Fighting for peace is like f**king for virginity" Is definately taken from crazy town.. Also.. "Now all my songs sound like suicide letters" Is definately also taken from them... And the line above what I last typed and that line don't make sense.