I won't say what it's about, it would be really cool if someone guessed Lucky River In the field of green I stand With my future in my hands Breathing clouds as they breathe me And building towers in front of me Hand in hand they come outside All dressed in red, two girls, one guy I move my lips as if to ask But they won't tell me what comes next The highest tower I'd ever seen On the turn of the century Palace wouldn't go amiss I'm all inprepared for this Lucky river flows my way Lucky river saves the day Born with nothing I'll die with everything
I dunno why but it kinda seems like it's about sex. Sorry if thats completely wrong. It's good nonetheless.
Better than sex?! Sounds fantastic. I do like it a lot though...but I'm not sure what it's referring to..
Actually, it's about winning a game of poker. Texas hold'em. I guess I'll have to start explaining all the references and word plays now
Haha I was just joking. But the feeling you get when you see the fifth card is the one you're expecting comes pretty close. At least on my scale
Haha you guys are great But that was I was actually trying to do, to completely hide the original meaning by using metaphors. I guess my mission is accomplished And for those who still can't make out any sense, green field = poker table, clouds = the cigarette smoke clouds, towers = little towers from chips, two girls and a guy = two queens and a jack, palace is a wordplay on Pallas, queen of spades' name, and turn and river are the names of the fourth and fifth card in texas holdem. (it's just now that I realize what a poker freak I am ) And once again, thanks for all the comments
Woah thats pretty cool how you wrote it. I got all the referances in the first paragraph but nothing after that. Btw that was after you said it was about poker.
Haha, that's awesome! I love the play on words, it's imaginative and shows that you have talent, IMO. Great job. ...So winning poker is almost as great as sex..maybe I should play poker?
Maybe you should try strip poker. A perfect combination. It almost always leads to sex and the game of poker with all the exicitement when you win a hand or two comes like foreplay And thank you very much for the comment