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    Lucky River

    I won't say what it's about, it would be really cool if someone guessed

    Lucky River

    In the field of green I stand
    With my future in my hands
    Breathing clouds as they breathe me
    And building towers in front of me

    Hand in hand they come outside
    All dressed in red, two girls, one guy
    I move my lips as if to ask
    But they won't tell me what comes next

    The highest tower I'd ever seen
    On the turn of the century
    Palace wouldn't go amiss
    I'm all inprepared for this

    Lucky river flows my way
    Lucky river saves the day
    Born with nothing
    I'll die with everything

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    I dunno why but it kinda seems like it's about sex.

    Sorry if thats completely wrong.

    It's good nonetheless.

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    It's about something even better than sex!

    Thanks for the comment

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dušan View Post
    It's about something even better than sex!

    Thanks for the comment
    Better than sex?! Sounds fantastic.

    I do like it a lot though...but I'm not sure what it's referring to..
    I wanna cut through my skin
    And pull you within
    My heart burns like the SUN
    As our flesh becomes ONE
    I n t h e d a r k n e s s

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    Is it about friends and frienship and the things that they give in life?


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    Actually, it's about winning a game of poker. Texas hold'em.

    I guess I'll have to start explaining all the references and word plays now

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    Quote Originally Posted by Dušan View Post
    Actually, it's about winning a game of poker. Texas hold'em.

    I guess I'll have to start explaining all the references and word plays now
    You think winning a game of poker is better than sex? What the hell dude?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Lucas de Hellflame View Post
    You think winning a game of poker is better than sex? What the hell dude?
    Haha I was just joking. But the feeling you get when you see the fifth card is the one you're expecting comes pretty close. At least on my scale

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    this is better than my lasted song.. DAMMIT!

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    At first I thought it was about the two chicks Eiffel Towering the dude.

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    Haha you guys are great

    But that was I was actually trying to do, to completely hide the original meaning by using metaphors. I guess my mission is accomplished

    And for those who still can't make out any sense, green field = poker table, clouds = the cigarette smoke clouds, towers = little towers from chips, two girls and a guy = two queens and a jack, palace is a wordplay on Pallas, queen of spades' name, and turn and river are the names of the fourth and fifth card in texas holdem.
    (it's just now that I realize what a poker freak I am )

    And once again, thanks for all the comments

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    Nice one

    I was actually thinking of someone trying to start a new life and find new friends...
    George Costanza: 3 pints of Kramer's blood!?

    Jerry Seinfeld:Yeah! I can feel his blood inside of me...y'know? Borrowing things from my blood!

    !!!

    Formerly known as Mr. Nobody

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    Thanks

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    Woah thats pretty cool how you wrote it. I got all the referances in the first paragraph but nothing after that.

    Btw that was after you said it was about poker.

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    Thank you

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    Haha, that's awesome! I love the play on words, it's imaginative and shows that you have talent, IMO. Great job.

    ...So winning poker is almost as great as sex..maybe I should play poker?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Qwerty10 View Post
    Haha, that's awesome! I love the play on words, it's imaginative and shows that you have talent, IMO. Great job.

    ...So winning poker is almost as great as sex..maybe I should play poker?
    Maybe you should try strip poker. A perfect combination. It almost always leads to sex and the game of poker with all the exicitement when you win a hand or two comes like foreplay

    And thank you very much for the comment

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    It's very cleverly written. I like it.
    silence your critics

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    nice metaphors, I want to eat them..

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