------------------ GiVon ^ ------------------ I wake with regret again Another days been blured with hate In my digrace Traped in my head again Feels that I've never control my fate Like I'll never leae this place I'm my own worse enemy I've given up I'm sick of fighting Is there nothing you can say? Take me far away, I'm suffocating Tell me what the fuck is wrong with me I don't know which path to take My eyes are focused but I'm scared I can't prepare As I hypervenilate Looking for help somehow, somewhere It's not like you care I'm my own worst emeny I've given up I'm sick of fighting Is there nothing you can say? Take me far away, I'm suffocating Tell me what the fuck is wrong with me Put me out of my misery Put me out of my misery Put me out of my Put me out of my fuckin suffering! I've given up I'm sick of fighting Is there nothing you can say? Take me far away, I'm suffocating Tell me what the fuck is wrong with me ------------------------------- Levout allda rest ------------------------------- I dreamed that I missing, you were so scared Yet not a soul would listen, because not a soul cared While after my dream I woke with this fear What am I leaving, after my times gone here? So if you're wondering ,I want you to know When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest Leave out all the rest, don't be afraid I've taken my beating, I've shared what I made I'm strong on the surface, not all the way through I've never been perfect, but neither have you [Rap] Keep me in you memory, just don't throw me out into the black and empty Forget the mistakes that I've made, try to mold them as if they were clay Burn the doubts and fear while I'm still here. Im strong on the surface but not way down deep to my roots. I never achived perfection and neither will you So if you're wondering, I want you to know When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest Leave out all the rest Forgetting all the hurt inside you've learned to hide so well Pretending someone else can come and save me from myself I can't be who you are When my time comes, forget the wrong that I've done Help me leave behind some reasons to be missed Don't resent me, and when you're feeling empty Keep me in your memory, leave out all the rest Leave out all the rest Forgetting all the hurt inside you've learned to hide so well Pretending someone else can come and save me from myself I can't be who you are I can't be who you are -------------------------------------------------------- |31337 et owt --------------------------- Yea here we go for the hundredth time, Two gernades in each hand while I'm in line Throw 'em up like you've lost your mind Thinking back to all my fucking crimes Filthy mouth, no excuse. Find a new place to hang this noose. String me up high from atop these roofs. Knot it tight so I won't get loose. Truth is you can stop right there With your eyes wide while you stare bled myself out and no one cares. Dug a trench out, laid down there With a shovel up out of reach somewhere. Yea someone pour it in, Wait right there 'til I begin Make it a dirt dance floor again. Say your prayers and stomp it out, When they bring that chorus in. [chours] I bleed it out digging deeper Just to wish it away I bleed it out digging deeper Just to watch it fade I beed it out digging deeper Just to throw it way, just to throw it away, just to throw it away No time to go, or to stop this show You chop your words in a sloppy flow Shotgun opera ready to go, lock and load Cock it back watch it go, before it explodes Someone help me, I've been cursed A trillon spells in solid dirt Death is rolling in every verse Candy paint on a brand new hearse No one contains him while he blurts his words, With no remorse Fuck this hurts, I won't lie Doesn't matter how hard I try I try to stop these thoughts of suiside Half the words I can't explain And I know I won't be satisfied Yeah someone throw me in, Make it a dirt dance floor again Say your prays and stop them out When they bring that chorus in [Chorus] I bleed it out I've opened up these scars I'll make you face this! I've brought myself so far I'll make you face this [rap] I bleed it out You've opened up your scars You're lost in your paces telling me to face it, this unexplainable pain, saying that it's not a game you bleed your thoughts, from the truth you've sought from all the lies you've bought. [Chorus] ------------------- Sha-do Uf The Day --------------------------- I close both locks on the window I close both blinds before I turn away Sometimes solutions aren't so simple Somtimes good byes the only thing to say And the sun will set for you Taking the place of the desolate moon And the shadow of the day Will embrace the world in grey And the sun will set for you In cards and flowers on your window Your friends all plead for you to stay With emotions captured in photos The memories will never fade Sometimes beginnings arn't so simple Sometimes good byes the only way And the sun will set for you The sun will set for you And the shadow of the day Will embrace the world in grey And the sun will set for you And the shadow of the day Will embrace the world in grey And the sun will set for you And the shadow of the day Will embrace the world in grey And the sun will set for you And the sun will set for you Taking the place of the desolate moon And the shadow of the day Will embrace the world in grey And the sun will set for you ---------------------------- Wat Eyve Dawn ---------------------------- In this farewell Theres no blood no alibi Cuz I've drawn regret from the root of a thousand lies So let mercy come And wash away What I've done. I face myself To cross out what I've become Erase myself I let go of all I've done Put to rest, what you've thought of me while I clean this slate With the hands of uncertainty So let mercy come and wash away Let forgiveness invade and wash away these stains I cross out the past with invisible ink, hold on get ready there's no time to blink. Think, if we held on to all our wrons what will we ever get done? Better to let the past be past and let the future come first rather than last For what I've done I start again And what ever pain may come Today this ends I'm letting go of what I've done What I've done. I face myself To cross out what I've become Erase myself I let go of all I've done -------------- Hands H317 Hi ------------------------ Turn my mike up louder I got to say something Light weights step to the side when we come in Feel it in your chest the syllables get pumping People on the street they panic and start running Words on loose leaf sheet complete coming I jump in my mind and summon the rhyme, I'm dumping Healing the blind I promise to let the sun in Sick of the dark ways we march to the drum and Jump when they tell us that they wanna see jumping Fuck that I wanna see some fists pumping Risk something, take back what's yours Say something that you know they might attack you for Cause I'm sick of being treated like I have before Like it's stupid standing for what I'm standing for Like this war's really just a different brand of war Like it doesn't cater the rich and abandon poor Like they understand you in the back of the jet When you can't put gas in your tank These fuckers are laughing their way to the bank and cashing the check Asking you to have compassion and have some respect For a leader so nervous in an obvious way Stuttering and mumbling for nightly news to replay And the rest of the world watching at the end of the day In their living room laughing like "what did he say?" [Chorus] Amen, I scream!!! Making you see, what it is, that is traping me! Let it be! So be it!!! This is true!!! Let it be! So be it!!!! These words speak truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [End Chorus] The chorus sings in my head, remembering all the soliders that got away before they died. Before the bombs exploded right in front of their eyes. They escape trying compare it to being worse than suicide, and before they have to take the dive for the rest of the team, realizing that it's not just a dream. that these guns in their hands mean life or death. to find out that life is not just a test. The chorus that screams in my head is seemingly endless atomic in it's honest truity. With hands held high into a sky that turns to grey from blue The storm clouds open up before they fall on you In my living room watching but I am not laughing Cause when it gets tense I know what might happen World is cold the bold men take action Have to react or get blown into fractions Ten years old it's something to see Another kid my age drug under a jeep Taken and bound and found later under a tree I wonder if he had thought the next one could be me Do you see the soldiers they're out today They brush the dust from bullet proof vests away It's ironic at times like this you pray But a bomb blew the mosque up yesterday There's bombs in the buses, bikes, roads Inside your market, your shops, your clothes My dad he's got a lot of fear I know But enough pride inside not to let that show My brother had a book he would hold with pride A little red cover with a broken spine On the back, he hand-wrote a quote inside When the rich wage war it's the poor who die Meanwhile, the leader just talks away Stuttering and mumbling for nightly news to replay And the rest of the world watching at the end of the day both scared and angry like "what did he say?" [Chorus] Amen I scream!!! Making you see, what it is, that is traping me! With hands held high, I cry Can you deny that this war is suicide!? I scream!!! Making you see, what it is, that is traping me! Let it be! So be it!!! This is true!!! Let it be! So be it!!!! These words speak truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!! With hands held high into a sky so blue As the ocean opens up to swallow you With hands held high into a sky so blue As the ocean opens up to swallow you With hands held high in a sky that turns to grey from blue The storm clouds open up before they fall on you. With hands held high in a sky that turns to grey from blue The storm clouds open up before they fall on you. With hands held high into a sky so blue As the ocean opens up to swallow you With hands held high into a that fades to grey from blue The black clouds open up before they swallow you. -------------------------- Know Moore Sorrow ---------------------------- I know your lost in you lies But why do you tell youself you don't realize That your crusade' just a disguise? You've replaced freedom with fear Traded money for lives I'm aware of what you've done!! GO!! No more sorrow I've paid for your mistakes Your time is about up Your time has come to be replaced I see their pain, I see their need I see the liars and fiends That only abuse power with greed I had hope, I believe But I'm beginning to think that I've been deceived You will pay for what you've done GO!! No more sorrow I've paid for your mistakes Your time is about up Your time has come to be replaced Face this, Hypocrite Face it, Hypocrite Face this, Hypocrite!! GO!! No more sorrow I've paid for your mistakes Your time is about up Your time has come to be replaced GO!! No more sorrow I've paid for your mistakes Your time is about up Your time has come to be replaced Your time has come to be replaced Your time has come to be washed away Your time has come to be erased Your time has come to be replaced Your time has come to be washed a way ------------------------------------------------------------- Voulentines Dai ------------------- My insides turn to ash So slow. And blew away as I collasped So cold. A black wind blew away From sight. Another darkness over day That night. And the clouds above moved closer Looking so dissatisfied And the heartless wind kept blowing, blowing I use to be my own protection But not now. Cuz my path has lost direction Somehow A black wind took you away From sight. Another darkness over day That night And the clouds above moved closer Looking so dissatisfied And the ground below grew colder As the put you down inside And the heartless wind kept blowing, blowing So now you're gone And was wrong I never knew what it was like To be alone [Rap] My path is lost, just like the mixed directions I've walked in solitude while in the dark I went over my thoughts after you left without a good bye, and without a reason as to telling me why Now I just sit here, not feeling a thing. My heart is crushed just like a birds broken wing But one thing about todays pain is that it's eternally more. Looking out the window remembering all the days before when I wasn't at home and all alone ` On a Valentines Day(x6) [in background] I just to be my own protection But not now Because my mind has lost direction Somehow ---------------------------- En Batwin -------------------- Stays the same just acustic guitar and chester sining "And I cannot" part -- En Pi-siz ------- Telling me to go, but hands beg me to stay. Your lips say that you love, your eyes say that you hate. There's truth in your lies, doubt in your faith All you built you've laid to waste, There's truth in your lies, doubt in your faith All I've gots what you didn't take And I, I wont be the one. Be the one to leave this, In pieces And you, you will be alone, alone with all your secrets And regrets, Don't lie (Rap Verse) Lie about all the things you've had before When you kept telling me you've always loved me more And now in peices you will see, that every pain that you've made for me I will take it all away and set them free, Breaking the ache inside my heart that only wants to feed (It only wants to feed, it only wants to feed) You promised me the sky, tossed me like a stone You wrap me in your arms, and chill me to the bone There's truth in your lies, doubt in your faith All you built you've laid to waste, There's truth in your lies, doubt in your faith All I've gots what you didn't take And I, I wont be the one. Be the one to leave this, In pieces And you, you will be alone, alone with all your secrets And regrets, Don't lie Like all the things you tell yourself inside your head Trying to create excuses to make me feel like I'm dead But you are the only one that will be filled with dread Not going to let your childish ways inside my head Intead, I'm gonna embrace the mistake that you've did Because now I'm free of the lies that you've always said (Guitair solo) And I, I wont be the one. Be the one to leave this, In pieces And you, you will be alone, alone with all your secrets And regrets, Don't lie (the pain it only want to feed on me, it only wants to feed) And I, I wont be the one. Be the one to leave this, In pieces And you, you will be alone, alone with all your secrets And regrets, Don't lie (piano outro) -------------------------------------- Lil things giv'ya awai ------------------------------------- (Adds some scracthing, take away the background add eletric guitar, some hip piano beats, and violin) Water grey, leaks through the windows And fill up the stair Chilling rain As if an ocean, everywhere Don't want to reach for me now do you I don't mean a thing to you The little things give you away And no there will be no mistaking The levees are breaking All you've ever wanted Was someone to truly look up to you Now six feet under water, I do Hope decays Generations disappear Wash away, as a nation kept with fear Don't want to reach for me now do you I don't mean a thing to you The little things give you away All you've ever wanted Was something to hold on to Little things give you away All you've ever wanted -Was someone to truly hold on to Now six feet under ground now I do Little things give you away Little things give you away Ohhh oh.. ohhhh oh ohhhhhh oh ohhhh ohhhhh. All you've ever wanted was someone to truly look up to you Little things give you away (x5) The little things give you away
They fit the rhytm of the song inside my head. Sadly I d not know how to write out the rythms I imagine. I can only imagine them as I play no instruments. I know how its suppose to sound though Plus it is NOT a rewrite of the album. It's a REMIX concept and with remixes comes new intros, outros, bridges and things all together.
I understand the concept, it's just, take this line for example from Given Up. Original line: Feels like I'll never leave this place Your line: Feels that I've never control my fate The way the rhythm of that particular line goes, there are too many syllables to fit into the original pacing of the line. It's very awkward to sing/say to the song in my opinion. Not to mention there should be a lot of proofreading on lines as well.
There is just something about the lyrics that isn't right. Maybe that What I've Done verse was ok. the new one...maybe
pretty much what dude said about the syllables before, and damn... i thought i was gonna be the only mean guy.. but damn... i dont even wanna anymore... lol
I mean, seriously. I could make something up on the spot that flows better than this. Try to fit to the rhythm. For example: Now, take that, and modify it. And just for the purposes of being creative, I'm going to throw in some stuff you may or may not recognize since it's a remix. No offense if I was offensive in anyway, I was just making some generic stuff up to make a point. You have to try to fit the words to the flow. Even if it is a remix, it doesn't change the time signature or the pacing of the song. The only thing is tempo, and that just (chop and) screws things up. Oh, and what good are the rhythms you imagine if we can't hear them? Do we just assume that your rhythms work and say, "Hey, good job?"
no offense or nothing, but it's not really "remixing" if you're changing just a few portions of what is originally written by someone else. also, as discussed above, the syllable counts tend to be all over the place.
I'll try one: Given Up(Underground Pound Remix) Put me out of Put me out of Put me out of Put me out of Put me out of Put me out of ...aaaaaAAAAAaAAAAAHHH!!H!H!!!!!!!!!!! MY FUCKING MISERY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Put me, Put me, Put me, Put me Put me, Put me, Put me, Put me(x10) I've given up (Put me, Put me, Put me) I've given, given, given, given Given up (Put me, Put me, Put me) Put me out of my Put me out of my Put me out of my Put me out of my FUCKING(fucking) MISERY..ery...ery....ry........y.............y.......y....y