Watching (plz read and respond)

Watching

Watching From
A distance
Searching For the answers
To questions that haven’t
Been asked

Sitting In The hell
Into which, into which,
I fell (continued)
Shrinking from
My Fears
Hiding, I’m Hiding (continued)
From My peers (continued)
Covering up my
Ears,
Trying, trying,
Not to hear
Their sneers (continued)

I can no longer stand on my own
Theses crutches are
A loan

My home, O my home,
Has burned to the ground

My life, My life (continued)
Is nowhere to be found (continued)


I am a puppy you
You are a hound

Always, always
Chasing me DOWN (continued)

~*End*~
J.K.

 

Your name reminds me of a song I wrote.

It's good so far but make it longer.

 

its not bad

 

It's Good. You would want to try to make it longer, but it's good.

 

aight yea i'll try making it longer and re post it when im done thnx for the feed back