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    Abandoned

    Two sets of footsteps are becoming distant
    She can't hear his cries in the pouring rain

    He's out of sight and she's in anothers arms
    She's out of sight and he has no where to go

    Each piece of time; like before; like me
    Doesn't matter without you.

    I don't want this, but your silence digs a wound
    Greater than your any words have ever said

    I screamed my lungs out trying to reach you
    But you only hear his whispers

    Each piece of time; like before; like me
    Doesn't matter without you.
    Each piece of time; like before
    Is worth the nothing that I am

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    antichrist esaul17's Avatar
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    Wow. I read this before and meant to comment, but forgot.

    I love your writing. This is great.

    "I screamed my lungs out trying to reach you
    But you only hear his whispers"

    I love that part.

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