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    We are the nobodies Seinfeld's Avatar
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    Follow the leader

    Follow the leader:

    Is anyone here to listen to 'what's wrong with us'?
    Another thing to weigh down on our wrenched guts?
    Does anyone know why we believe what we're told?
    Who's gonna make it clear to them, 'We're not gonna fold'!

    [I am,
    so get ready to drown
    If I fall,
    everybody's goin' down
    I refuse to...

    Follow the leader! x2]

    The one we refused to follow, yet we fought by his side?
    Just a tool to reinforce the strength of our lies!
    Once the battle's been fought, and the blood's been spilt
    Who's gonna try and wash away the leader's guilt?

    [I am,
    so get ready to drown
    If I fall,
    everybody's goin' down
    I refuse to...

    Follow the leader! x2]

    But when it comes down to the cut:

    Can anyone find a reason to love a broken heart?
    Something that coul never be fixed from the start?
    Is anyone brave enough to live on without any heights?
    Is anyone ready to give it all up without a fight?

    I can't,
    so let me drown
    If I fall,
    let me hit the ground
    As I refuse to...

    Follow the leader



    This one's kinda hard to explain...it's all about the whole 'rebel' inside...how you try to move on without any guidelines or rules...(without a leader)...and still you use the rules to get what you want...basically you manipulate facts the way you can make most use of them...and as soon as you went to far with that whole way of moving forward, it all snaps back, 'cause the 'leader' breaks down...

    I really hope someone likes it...
    George Costanza: 3 pints of Kramer's blood!?

    Jerry Seinfeld:Yeah! I can feel his blood inside of me...y'know? Borrowing things from my blood!

    !!!

    Formerly known as Mr. Nobody

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    wow the dark side has cookies!I'm there! miny_girl_LP's Avatar
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    Well you don't have to hope any more!I like it,more than you can imagine.But you know me....everything you write,no matter what it is i like it.Great job once again!

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    antichrist esaul17's Avatar
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    Not bad. The topic doesn't hit home to me as much as some of your other stuff, but it isn't a bad piece. A couple rhymes seemed forced, but overall not to bad.

    Good job.

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