Song I Wrote

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    x7r3m3

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    May or may not know, I write songs ( also poetry and stuff like that ) well I just finished one tell me what ya think, some may like some may not, I just want your opinion, oh and the tune of it is, like a LP - Figure.09 sound if you have heard it

    So Tired:

    [Verse 1]
    Lying here, nothing to do
    (I'm almost gone)
    Closing my eye, death apporching fast
    (Just runnen out of time)
    You, siten there, nothings the same
    I am just so....tired

    [Chours]
    I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
    just leave me hear, go away
    turn your head, walk away
    im almost gone...

    [Verse 2]
    Day after day, all the same
    like you just dont care, what is my life
    can i just break away, take the pain
    live your life, just walk away
    I'm just so....tired

    [Chours]
    I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
    just leave me hear, go away
    turn your head, walk away
    im almost gone...

    [Verse 3]
    This is happen, I'm still not healed
    just leave me hear, leave me hear
    my face is swety im out of time, but
    I dont want you to be the one
    I just realize, its not all right, im just tired...

    so tired... (2x)

    [Chours]
    I'm almost gone, runnen out of time
    just leave me hear, go away
    turn your head, walk away
    im almost gone...
     
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    ProJecT NotHinG

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    nice, i haven't heard Figure.09 yet, so i don't know what it'll sound like.
     

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