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    Queen

    This is the first song I've posted on the LPA in a long while and I've gotta say that this song is probably the most peculiar song I've ever written. To be perfectly honest, I doubt that anyone will read it and get a good idea of how the rhythm goes but whatever, hopefully you can still appreciate what is written. I hope you like it, and please comment


    "Queen"

    I'm in love with all these places I should have been but haven't yet,
    And I'm in love with all these girls that I've never even met,
    Just know that when I get back I'll kill you all with songs and words so sharp that they slit your arms with wounds that never heal and oh my lord you are bleeding,
    We are bleeding, this is bleeding.
    The emo kid in me is dead; he slit his wrists and sat and bled,
    He was linking words to suicide and death and now he's bled out on the floor with his last breath,
    And "I can't stand up no more" was the last thing he said and now he cries out for something less and oh my lord you are bleeding,
    We are bleeding, this is bleeding.


    How did it come to this? We can never fall apart,
    'Cause right now I need you more than I need my heart,
    Queen 'I have no name' will remain nameless,
    Cut me. Will I bleed, my saviours?


    The spider said to the fly, "Let's go for a walk outside I'm not a threat to you,
    I swear I'm not so let's do whatever you wanna do,
    And I don't understand where that stereotype came from, I feed and bleed like you us two, are similar creatures with a tendency to... oh my lord you are bleeding,
    Well I needed feeding, have you stopped breathing?"
    The spider said as the fly took his last breath and replied, "I should have never trusted you,
    Us two are more different than you think, us flies are way more trusting,
    And have our horrible failures to deal with, but in death I'll be way more free than you to do whatever I want to do and oh my lord I am bleeding,"
    I am the fly, and you are the spider.


    How did it come to this? We can never fall apart,
    'Cause right now I need you more than I need my heart,
    Queen bee will remain nameless,
    Cut me. Will I bleed, my saviours?


    When the girl I'd die for tells me to drop dead I will,
    Be my guest, try it out, if you will,
    See me sitting down, on your windowsill,
    Go ahead and ask me queen, if you will,
    When the girl I'd die for tells me to drop dead I will,
    Be my guest, try it out, take this pill, if you will,
    Then choke it down, without a sound, love, be careful not to drown as you swim around,
    The trouble with me is that I'm never quite on the ground, and I'm way too loud, and I'm way too proud.


    How did it come to this? We can never fall apart,
    'Cause right now I need you more than I need my heart,
    Queen 'I have no name' will remain nameless,
    Cut me. Will I bleed, my saviours?
    How did it come to this? We can never fall apart,
    'Cause right now I need you more than I need my heart,
    Queen bee will remain nameless,
    Cut me. Will I bleed, my saviours?
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    As I said on MSN they're weird but they are good. Well done man.

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    I'm still trying to pick my jaw up off the ground. It's unusual, but abso-fucking-lutely amazing.

    TEAM RAMPAGE. Formerly known as tornrose&Mali&Maranwe&Sawyer&Hodgins&Panic&Malice&Psyche&Sake

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    This is awsome, good job exept i had to read it twice before i understood

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    Thank you all so much for the comments

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