it ain't that good but still got nothing else to post :s Now, i can ... fucking writing to myself again it doesn't seem so crazy when it feels to me that it's all that i got. went back and fort thru my story read it without any glory twice now, it's way short main character felt like he was ignored. just like me cause that's all what i'm ever supposed to be set me free i'll stand up but fall on my knees. ...
i loved the theme, the whole motive about you drawing yourself in a story and telling the reader about your story in the poem. good job!