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    It's what you like, not what you're like. Christopher's Avatar
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    The title is up to you ...

    it ain't that good but still got nothing else to post :s

    Now, i can ...
    fucking writing to myself again
    it doesn't seem so crazy
    when it feels to me that it's all that i got.

    went back and fort thru my story
    read it without any glory
    twice now, it's way short
    main character felt like he was ignored.

    just like me
    cause that's all what i'm ever supposed to be
    set me free i'll stand up but fall on my knees.

    ...

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    ...waiting. Arhaz's Avatar
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    i loved the theme, the whole motive about you drawing yourself in a story and telling the reader about your story in the poem. good job!

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    It's what you like, not what you're like. Christopher's Avatar
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    thanks

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