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    Leaving

    Leaves are falling on the ground
    As Iím walking the empty streets of my home town
    Where everybody used to know me
    And I used to know everyone
    I remember the day
    We went the separate ways
    To never see each other again
    To pursue our dreams
    We were too young to realize
    Now itís too late to take it back

    The sky opens wide
    And the rain starts to fall
    I see your shattered smile in every single raindrop
    The echo of the wind sounds just like your voice
    The pavement is melting under my feet
    The ground is calling me
    The ground is swallowing me
    I scream your name
    Drowning in the river of memories
    My lungs are filled with you now
    I cannot breathe anymore

    And then Iím back into the reality
    The sun is high in the sky
    I see the happy couples walking hand in hand
    Familiar faces say hallo to me
    Back to my home town again
    Back home again
    I left and I regret
    I should have never left home
    I should have never left you

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    Niiiiice.

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    I really liked this, but i don't think it's your best, you've written so many totally amazing things, that's it hard to remain at that level constantly.

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    Originally posted by D_A_V_I_D@Sep 30 2005, 01:32 PM
    I really liked this, but i don't think it's your best, you've written so many totally amazing things, that's it hard to remain at that level constantly.
    You have stolen my words.

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    Wow... i just start to imagne when i read it ,really talented thing keep on that

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    No one can ever steel these words, Nice, great job.
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