Nothing I Can Do (In The Middle Of Nowhere)

[El Muerto]

Nothing I Can Do (In The Middle Of Nowhere)

Standing all alone in the middle of nowhere
Like a lightning rod on the top of the mountain
Winds are blowing and breaking me
Everyone has forsaken me
There is nothing that
Nothing that now I can do

Burning in the sun in the middle of desert
Like a grain of sand lonely lost forever
Pain is growing inside of me
Everyone has forgotten me
There is nothing that
Nothing that now I can do

Running in the street in the middle of downfall
Hanging off of a cliff and I’m ready to crumble
Down below lies the dirt with my bones in it
It’s never really been this hard for me to admit
There is nothing that
Nothing that now I can do

[D_A_V_I_D]

I like it

Really nice imagery, it flowed nicely and the poem overall was great, the only line that annoyed me slightly is

Nothing that now I can do

It's not the greatest english and it seems out of place, unless you ment it to be like that.

[El Muerto]

Originally posted by D_A_V_I_D@Sep 26 2005, 11:01 AM
I like it

Really nice imagery, it flowed nicely and the poem overall was great, the only line that annoyed me slightly is

Nothing that now I can do

It's not the greatest english and it seems out of place, unless you ment it to be like that.

Nothing in my lyrics is accidental. It's just the way I wanted it to be.

It perfectly fits in with the melody I wrote it to.

Thanks for the comment anyway I appreciate it.